splintered rapture dances entranced with death’s embrace
she cries blood tears to a laughing moon that sways between wispy clouds daring rain to pelt the urban jungle and threaten dancing charges to rumble gracefully that distant sun a memory lost frayed...
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Well, we're often solitary beings in this place, even who has multiple brains. Very well captured, Laura.. good to read you again.
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Yes!! Ok, first it is SOooo awesome to get to read you again, my friend!! Now...the piece is masterfully put together!! The fear of being trapped in one's own mind is one poets and fiction writers...
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This is brilliant! Well written with solid imagery and lots of great lines. Totally enjoyed this...I can relate too. Love it!
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Mir - thanks so much for reading this. yup I came outta my schell for a change. that beast reared its head and keeps rattling around up there in the brainpan.
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thanks so much for reading me Eric! words from the dragon always leave a smile. but such flattery, hon, I so do not deserve to be even mentioned in the same sentence as Poe or Lovecraft! pills suck...
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thanks for reading and understanding karen! sometimes i feel like it's lost - that pesky muse.
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